the action is quite good - however missing some tension, more dynamic camera movement will definitley help with that
and you should also consider not using uber big dust explosions too often as that kinda weakens their effect (some hits just didn't even look strong enough to reason their use)
grammar, spelling and use of certain words were kinda awkward
that made all the long talking rather boring - could've been shortened still telling the very same story
well go ahead
why did the 'imporbability management' device need to be destroyed? D:
and did jesus shoot hank, the clown and the other two random guys at the beginning?
"could not be found"
is it already gone?
if yes ... well that was fast
last ones were better
i think the only criticpoint i got is that the animation were a bit too fast
thats why i like the old ones better - could follow it easier
and i think you could try to get more movement into the new character style - though those graphics are much better :)
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